To get the idea of my essay, I thought about what inspires me. Something that I have a lot of feelings for. I started off with the idea of my mom and how she is a very strong woman and a survivor. I decided to write about our personal experiences and challenges over the past year. I started off with making an outline of what took place, how it happen and the outcome. After I started typing my essay, the subject matter was easy to bring up because it is in which the order it happend, but the sentences were hard to structure. I feel I could add more detail and interesting facts to my essay but some readers wouldn't understand it. This being my rough draft I will revise it. I could have been more organized with certain parts. These personal situations have insired me and made me a better person. The information I used was what my mother had to deal with. This is a sensative subject and tragic event that occurred in my life. Things happen for a reason, I have yet to figure out why. I feel I have gone through to much in a short matter of time, but it has made me a better person. Watching my mother be a survivor I know how to handle certain situation I am placed in. Having readers read a part of my life, and hearing what they have to say should be interesting.
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